Tuesday, May 23, 2017

Sara Marks...Modern Persuasion

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 First time author, Sara Marks, and first time visitor to More Agreeably Engaged, is here to share about her release, Modern Persuasion. I'm really excited to have you to here as one of your stops on your blog tour. Ms. Marks most graciously allowed me to post today instead of yesterday, which was my date, and I appreciate that more than you know, Sara! Thank you.

One of my first thoughts when Sara Marks contacted me was why she had chosen Persuasion as the book for her retelling. Sara answers that and more questions in her frequently asked questions. I hope you will enjoy reading them as much as I have.

Please welcome author, Sara Marks.


Why did you select Persuasion to modernize? Why not another Austen Story?

Persuasion is my personal favorite of all the novels Austen wrote. This actually wasn’t the first one I wrote. The novel I am finishing this year is a modernization of Pride and Prejudice. This is also one of 4 modernized Austen novels that I am working
on. They are my four favorites of her novels. The reason I focused on Modern
Persuasion first was because I realized a lot of people wrote variations and
modernizations of Pride and Prejudice. Far fewer wrote them about Persuasion. I
wanted to pay homage to the story I loved as the first book I published.

You grew up in Miami, a very diverse city, did that influence you as you sat down to write novels?

I love living in diverse locations and Miami was one of the most diverse places I’ve
lived. It gives me a chance to learn about new cultures and see the world through
different eyes. I think seeing so much diversity helped me be more empathetic as a
writer. It makes it a little easier for me to see things through the eyes of different

What would you be if you weren’t an author?

For a long time I wanted a job where I could sit on the couch all day and watch TV
shows, but that got boring the summer between graduating and getting my first
librarian job. My parents think I can do anything I put my mind too. There was my
childhood dreams of being Princess Leia or a unicorn, mermaid princess. In High
School I was positive I was going to be a television editor or producer until I realized I
didn’t really enjoy it. My mother still thinks that I should do this, 20 years later. I am
already thinking about what comes next! I want to be a professional Wikipedian. Not
paid by people to edit for them, but paid to do whatever I want to do on Wikipedia.

If your characters met you in real life, what would they say or do to you?

I am pretty sure, out of all the characters in the book, I am more like Mary in
personality than the others. I suspect the other characters would probably treat me
the way they treat Mary: tolerate because they love her. Elizabeth, I am pretty sure,
would forget I even exist. I imagine she would meet me multiple times and forget that
she has met me before.

When you are writing a modern version of an old book, how much do you feel obliged to stick with the original plot line? Modern individuals might make totally different decisions than the characters in the original story make. If these decisions are crucial to the plot, how do you get around that?

I think Austen’s themes are universal and timeless, especially in Persuasion. People
often make choices they regret. People sometimes get a second chance to correct
those mistakes. When I decided to tell Persuasion in a modern context, I looked to the
themes, the plot, and the characters. I suspect there will be people who will be
unhappy that I wasn’t more true to the original, but I had my own story to tell. I took
out characters that didn’t serve a purpose anymore. I looked at plot points and tried
to decide if they would happen and if they were critical to the plot. I even made a few
changes, but over all Persuasion was a dream to modernize.

What were you like at school?

I was actually invisible at school. I wasn’t popular, but I wasn’t bullied either. After
elementary school I attended middle and high school out of my normal area. I didn’t
grow up with the people in my schools and I didn’t spend time with them outside of
school. The friends I had in the area only spent time with me outside of school. It
made school a very different experience for me than for others. I don’t value high
school the way others do, especially because it wasn’t the end of my education.

Give us an insight into your main character. What does he/she do that is so special?

I think what makes Emma so special is that she is like most other women in a way we
rarely talk about. She struggles with her choices, takes on burdens that might not be
hers to bear, and gets stuck in ruts without realizing it. She makes choices with the
tools she has available and sometimes they turn out to be the wrong ones. I think a lot
of people will relate to her.

How much research do you do?

It depends on the story and how outside my experience it is. For Modern
Persuasion, I did a lot of research about what book tours are like for authors. I knew
what I wanted to happen, so I had to know if it was common or would be out of the

Why do you write?

For years I constructed stories in my head and played them out over and over
in different ways. I realized I had to write the stories down to be able to move on. I
would just obsesses about the characters and plots in intricate detail if I didn’t. Once I
wrote them down I could move on to the next story. When I discovered National
Novel Writing Month I found my place to focus on the writing. I spent years writing
the one big story that had been in my head for most of my life. Once that was done I
was finally ready to move on to other projects.

How do you think you’ve evolved creatively?

When I first started writing, it was primarily this weird universe of inter connected fan
fiction for the tv shows, movies, and even books I loved. For years I mostly borrowed
characters from other universes. It started with the ideas of what I would do in that
universe. What if I was Buffy the Vampire Slayer? What if I was an elf in Middle
Earth? What I have been writing recently is more using the plot structure of another
author, Jane Austen in this case, and seeing what they would be like in modern
situations. Austen was both a creature of her time and ahead of her time. So many of
her plots can be applied to modern situations.

What is the hardest thing about writing?

For me, it’s finding the right story to tell. I often sit with an idea in my head for
years. I live with the characters and get to know them. I can tell you the day to day
things in their lives, but that isn’t a story. I have to find the problem they need to
resolve and that can take time. While I do that, I have an inclination to tell you all the
details of their lives. I always struggle to cut out the details that aren’t important.

What is the easiest thing about writing?

For me, it’s the flip side of the hardest thing. I find it really easy to develop the
characters. I spend a lot of time thinking of my characters. It often seems like I am
living with them and talking to them. I know so many rich details about their lives. I
know their motivations and the choices they make.

How long on average does it take you to write a book?

I always do my first draft during National Novel Writing Month. They have three
events a year. Modern Persuasion was a first draft in July 2014. I wrote the entire
book in that month. Then I let it sit for a while until I am ready to revise it. I like to
see it with fresh eyes. That can take a few months, depending on what else is going
on. From starting Modern Persuasion to the day I submitted it to publishers, it took 2
years to complete.

Do you ever get writer’s Block?

Answer: I use to get it until I discovered what I need to do with it. I realized that I get
blocked when I think I have to write something I don’t want to really write. I am the
only one accountable to my writing plans and when I remembered I could change
anything I want, I started getting good at recognizing when I was hitting that wall. I
stop forcing myself to write something and start writing whatever is in my head that’s
easier to work on. Eventually I come back to the block, but I do it when I am excited
about that project again.

Do you read much and if so who are your favorite authors.

I read a lot. I generally read over 100 books a year. I think Jane Austen is my favorite
and clearly she has a strong influence on what I am writing right now.

What advice would you give to your younger self?

Answer: As tempted as I am to advise my younger self, I wouldn’t give me any. I am
who I am now because of the choices I made, the advise I listened to, and the advise I
ignored. I wouldn’t want to risk changing who I became because of my ego thinking I
am smarter now than I was then.


Connect with Sara Marks:
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Author Bio:

Sara Marks is an author, knitter, Wikipedian, and librarian from Massachusetts. After over 10 years of participating in National Novel Writing Month, she is releasing her first novel, Modern Persuasion, with Illuminated Myth Publishing.  When she isn’t writing, she is an academic librarian at University of Massachusetts Lowell.  She has a masters degree in library science and another in Communications.  She spent 6 years as a member of Toastmasters International where she twice earned the status of Distinguished Toastmaster, the highest status members can achieve.  She is one of the local organizers for National Novel Writing Month.

5 Fun Facts You Didn’t Know About Sara:

1. Sara worked as a clown in college.  She would go to birthday parties and local events in Miami to paint faces and make balloon animals.
2. Sara failed out of college before returning home to find a new path in life.  It took her 7.5 years to get her B.A.  She is a firm believer in being able to fix your mistakes and getting second chances.
3. Her dog, Cedric, was named for Cedric Diggory, her favorite character in Harry Potter.  In reality, the dog is a Slytherin.
4. Every year, since 2004, Sara has participated in National Novel Writing Month.  She has won every year, except 2005 when she lost by 1,000 words.
5. Sara has been a Wikipedia editor for over 10 years.


Blog Tour Schedule:

5/22 My Jane Austen Bookclub

5/23 Most Agreeably Engaged

5/23 Half Agony, Half Hope

5/24 JustJane 1813

5/24 The Ardent Reader

5/25 From Pemberly to Milton

5/26 Diary of an Eccentric

5/26 My Love for Jane Austen

5/27 Babblings of a Bookworm

5/28 Musings from the Yellow Kitchen

5/29 vvb32 Reads

5/29 Austenesque Reviews


Giveaway: There are two giveaways.

Giveaway 1: This one is for my blog. It is one eBook copy of Modern Persuasion. It will end on May 29th at 11:59 PM. Leave a comment here to be entered and please leave me your contact info.

Giveaway 2: Fredrick’s book tour knick knacks and autographed paperback copy.  Since part of the story happens on Fredrick’s book tour, I have selected touristy knick-knacks from each of the cities they visit.  The winner will get the entire collection of knick knacks and an autographed paperback copy of the book.  This raffle is limited to US participants. To enter, people will need to sign up for my mailing list.  Everyone who signs up for the mailing list is added to the raffle and also get a short story related to Modern Persuasion: “Mary and the Anti-Feminist”.  The raffle opens on the 22nd and ends on June 5th.  The picture of the giveaway items is below.

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What a fabulous giveaway you have, Ms. Marks. I think you will have some very happy winners. Thank you for having such a generous giveaway. Good luck to everyone! Don't forget the eBook giveaway for my blog post requires you to leave a comment below. The Rafflecopter is for the grand prize.

I loved reading your frequently asked questions and the facts about you. I think you are one interesting lady! :) I have a feeling your parents are correct, you can do anything you decide to do. Best wishes with your book and your blog tour.  I'm so happy to have you stop by and let us get to know you a bit.

Thank you again for allowing me to switch my post day at the last minute. You were a life saver!


  1. Ooh, I would love to win a copy of your book! Ever since you mentioned it on Austen Variations' facebook page, I've been waiting for it to come out. Thanks for these giveaways - they are both terrific.
    Ginna Say What at gmail dot com

  2. Fun to get to know Sara Marks and her book better. Persuasion is my favorite of the Austen novels, too. :) On the wish list now.
    Thanks for the giveaway opportunity!
    sophiarose1816 at gmail dot com

  3. I so wish there were more Persuasion FFs out there. Persuasion's my favourite JA novel after P&P. Congratulations on your publication! and thanks for the giveaway.

  4. I must confess that Pride and Prejudice is still my favorite book, but Persuasion is Number 2. I think a Modern Persuasion sounds wonderful, and I'd like to see how Sara develops it. Are there mean girls after Anne representing the Musgrave sisters and probably her own sisters, Elizabeth and Mary, are the ringleaders! Thank you for the giveaway. evamedmonds(at)gmail(dot)com

  5. I love Persuasion and am so glad to see another variation of it as I don't think there are nearly enough. Thanks for the chance to win a copy! jadseah4 (at) yahoo

  6. Sometimes, Persuasion vies for top spot with P&P in my Austen league table, so it's lovely to see a new JAFF book come out that's based on it.

    Thanks for letting us get to know you a little better Sarah.

    angmardee (at) hotmail (dot) com

  7. For anyone that may have questions, please direct them to Sara Marks on her Goodreads page. She has been unable to respond to the comments here. I apologize for the inconvenience to all of you.